Essay: Money
Some people say that you don't need much money to be happy. What do you think?
Money has always been considered as a method of trading and we use it in exchange of essential items needed to survive. But nowadays it has become one of the keys of a successful life. If you want to be an influent and respected person, you had to possess a great amount of money. But, does money give us happiness?
First of all, we had to admit that money is an indispensable way of satisfying our basic needs. We need goods and services and we can only obtain them through money. Every human being in this world need to earn a salary in order to buy food, clothes and even shelter. But that doesn't mean that we need big wealths. On the contrary, those who have less money are proved to be happier.
Secondly, it's certain that money provide us stability and a good standard of living, which allows us to travel for holidays, have medical assistance or good food and education. With money we can purchase entertaining devices too, such as computers and tablets. Some of them are really expensive, but you don't need to have the latest gadgets to be happy, as long as there there are affordable ones out there today.
In conclusion, although it is claimed that money brings happiness, I don't agree with this thought. Money is necessary to some extent but there are things more valuable in this world.
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Essay: Money
Some people say that you don't need much money to be happy. What do you think?Money has always been considered as a method of trading and we use it in exchange of for essential items needed to survive. But nowadays it has become one of the keys of to a successful life. If you want to be an influential and respected person, you have to possess a great amount of money. But, does money give us happiness?
First of all, we have to admit that money is an indispensable way of satisfying our basic needs. We need goods and services and we can only obtain them through money. Every human being in this world needs to earn a salary in order to buy food, clothes and even shelter. But that doesn't mean that we need big a lot of wealths. On the contrary, those who have less money are proven to be happier.
Secondly, it's certain that money provides us with stability and a good standard of living, which allows us to travel for holidays, have medical assistance or good food and education. With money we can purchase entertaining devices too, such as computers and tablets. Some of them are really expensive, but you don't need to have the latest gadgets to be happy, as long as there there are affordable ones out there today.
In conclusion, although it is claimed that money brings happiness, I don't agree with this thought idea. Money is necessary to some extent but there are things more valuable in this world [or "more valuable things in this world"].
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Essay: Money
Some people say that you don't need much money to be happy. What do you think?Money has always been considered as a method of trading and we use it in exchange of essential items needed to survive. But nowadays it has become one of the keys of a successful life. If you want to be an influential and respected person, you have to possess a great amount of money. But, does money give us happiness?
First of all, we have to admit that money is an indispensable way of means to satisfying our basic needs. We need goods and services and we can only obtain them through money. Every human being in this world needs to earn a salary in order to buy food, clothes and even shelter. But that doesn't need mean that we need big wealthy large amounts of wealth. On the contrary, those who have less money are proven to be happier.
Secondly, it's certain that money provides us stability and a good standard of living, which allows us to travel for holidays, have medical assistance, and good food and education. We can purchase entertainment devices too, such as computers and tablets. Some of them are really expensive, but you don't need to have the latest gadgets to be happy, as long as there there are affordable ones out there today.
In conclusion, although it is claimed that money brings happiness, I. don't agree with this thought. Money is necessary to some extent but there are things more valuable in this world.
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