I need a correction ! (my resolutions of the year)
We are beginning a new year! And as every beginning of year, we want to take many resolutions. Here are mine.
First of all, I want to stop bickering with my sister. I see her only the weekend because I am in the boardinghouse. Moreover, she is eighteen years old, so perhaps, I will see her less in few years. So, I would like to take advantage with her. My second resolution is to work during the summer holidays. It will allow me not to be bored during 2 months, and at the same time to earn money to buy things. I could also see how is to work on the daily as an adult.
Then, this year I want to do sport every Tuesdays and Thursdays. On Tuesdays there is climbing to the boardinghouse on 7:15 pm at 8:45 pm. And on Thursdays, I want to do fitness in my bedroom. I would like to do that with my friends because that will motivate me. To finish, I would like to participate more in classroom. In my bulletin of the first quarter, I have had good remarks except that I don’t participate a lot. So, I want to speak more on oral.
Anyway, I don’t need to respect this resolutions because I am nearly perfect.
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I need a correction ! (my resolutions of for the year)
First of all, I want to stop bickering with my sister. I only see her only on/during the weekend because I am in the a boarding house. Moreover, she is eighteen years old, so perhaps, I will see her less in a few years. So, I would like to take advantage of my time with her.
(you could also say 'make the most of my time with her')
My second resolution is to work during the summer holidays. It This will allow me not to not be bored during these 2 months, and at the same time, to earn money to buy things. I could also see how what it is like to work on the a daily basis as like an adult.Then, In addition, this year I want to do sport every Tuesdays and Thursdays. On Tuesdays there is climbing to at the boardinghouse on from 7:15 pm at to 8:45 pm. And on Thursdays, I want to do fitness in my bedroom. I would like to do that with my friends because that will motivate me.
To finish, I would like to participate more in the classroom. In my bulletin of for the first quarter, I have had good remarks, except that I don’t didn't participate a lot. So, Therefore, I want to speak more during class on oral.
(maybe you mean 'speak in more oral presentations' or perhaps 'speak out more'... it's not natural to say 'speak orally')
Anyway/in any case, I don’t need to respect this these resolutions because I am nearly perfect.
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I need a correction, please ! (my resolutions of the year)
We are beginning a new year. And as at every beginning of year, we want to make many resolutions. Here are mine.First of all, I want to stop bickering with my sister. I see her only weekends because I am in the boardinghouse. Moreover, she is eighteen years old, so perhaps, I will see her less in a few years. So, I would like to take up this opportunity. My second resolution is to work during the summer holidays. It will stop me becoming bored for 2 months, and at the same time I can earn money to buy things. I could also see how is the world of work.
Then, this year I want to do sport every Tuesdays and Thursdays. On Tuesdays there is climbing in the boardinghouse from 7:15 pm to 8:45 pm. And on Thursdays, I want to do fitness in my bedroom. I would like to do that with my friends because they will motivate me. To finish, I would like to participate more in classroom. In my bulletin of the first quarter, I got good remarks but I did not participate much. So, I want to speak more in the oral part.
Anyway, I don’t need to respect these resolutions because I am nearly perfect. Your resolution is to have no resolution? (Epimenides)
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Christian has performed a good job. We would usually say report card instead of bulletin and comments instead of remarks.
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