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Traditions This full week was special in Mexico because every year in January 6 in the morning the wizard king visit all the mexican kids and bring them toys an ¨every¨ they want. Also another tradition froms this day are going with the family an cut an kingcake, a kingcake was like a gigant donut bul in the top has sugar and fruit and inside has a baby who represents Jesus.Acording the tradition this baby was hidden because represents when Maria and Jose hid Jesus from the bad people who wants to kill him. My writting is not very good, so I´d very happy to have corrections

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Hi Kasia,

I hope you are able to understand what I corrected for you. I am not sure about your original description of the donut so I tried my best according to my interpretation. The subject (wizard) is in the singular form, so the verb must be written in the singular form as well (visits). 


Hope this help.

Cheers, Lance


Traditions

This full week was special in It was a special full week in Mexico because the wizard king visits all the Mexican kids and bring them toys and everything else they want on 6th of January every year. every year in January 6 in the morning the wizard king visit all the mexican kids and bring them toys an ¨every¨ they want. Another tradition that is still practised is the cutting of a kingcake. A kingcake is shaped like a gigantic donut with sugar and fruit inside. A baby who represents Jesus is hidden in the kingcake. 

Also another tradition froms this day are going with the family an cut an kingcake, a kingcake was like a gigant donut bul in the top has sugar and fruit and inside has a baby who represents Jesus.

According to tradition, the baby is hidden to symbolise the fact that Maria and Jose hid Jesus from the evil people who want to kill him.

Acording the tradition this baby was hidden because represents when Maria and Jose hid Jesus from the bad people who wants to kill him. 


My writting is not very good, so I´d very happy to have corrections

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Traditions

This whole week was special in Mexico. Every year on January 6, the wizard king visit all the mexican kids in the morning and brings them toys or something they want. Also, another tradition on this day, families cut a King cake. A king cake is like a gigantic donut topped with sugar and fruit and the inside has a baby who represents Jesus. According to the tradition this baby was hidden because it represents when Maria and Jose hid Jesus from the bad people who wanted to kill him. 



Hello!

some corrections: you would say the whole/entire week instead of "The full week". You can also rephrase to say "The week is full of ..."

When talking about dates, you will always use "on".

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Traditions

This full week was special in Mexico because every year on January 6 in the morning the wizard king visits all the Mexican kids and brings them toys and ¨everything¨ they want. Also, another tradition from this day is going with the family to cut an kingcake.  A kingcake is like a gigantic donut but has sugar and fruit on top and inside has a baby who represents Jesus.According to the tradition, this baby is hidden because it represents when Maria and Jose hid Jesus from the bad people who wanted to kill him.

My writting is not very good, so I´d very happy to have corrections

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Traditions

This full week was special in Mexico because every year in on  6 January 6 in the morning the wizard king visits all the mexican Mexican kids and brings them toys and ¨everything¨ they want. Also another tradition froms on this day are is going with the family an to cut an a kingcake,. A kingcake was is like a gigant giant donut doughnut (**) bul but in the top has sugar and fruit on the top and inside has a baby who represents Jesus inside. Acording According to the tradition this baby was hidden because it represents when Maria and Jose (**Mary and Joseph) hid Jesus from the bad people who wants wanted to kill him.

**British English spellings

Hope it helps :)

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I've always wondered about the tradition of the king cake - thanks for explaining it so well!

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