The New Technologies
Today, there are more and more new technologies that allow us to make many things. But the new technologies have dangers like on the internet.
You can have insecure payments when you do buying conveniently and you can have a virus data on the computer because of downloads and watching movies and series.
You can also have your identity being stolen by speaking to new people and by play online games.
I think that's new technologies are very dangerous for the children because you can also have a terrorist and cyberbullying on the social networks.
But the internet is a great invention beacause you can have meetings or you can chat with friends even if today, we live in a connected world.
The new technologies are invention for the life but we must be wary of dangerous.
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New Technologies
Today, there are more and more new technologies that allow us to do* many things. But new technologies** have dangers like on the internet.You can have insecure payments when you are shopping online, and you can get a virus on your computer from downloads and watching movies and series.
You can also have your identity stolen when speaking to new people and playing online games.
I think that new technologies are very dangerous for children because you can also have terrorist and cyberbullying on social networks, but the internet is a great invention because you can have meetings or you can even chat with friends. Today, we live in a connected world.
New technologies are convenient for life but we must be wary of their dangers***.
*Do works best here, not make. Common mistake for French speakers because faire can mean both.
**Also note that in the plural form, nouns do not always need to have the article "the". When referring to a group of things in general, "the" is not needed. When referring to a specific group of things, "the" is required.
***"wary of" needs to be followed by a noun not an adjective. You can not be wary of dangerous.
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