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Could anybody help me correct this ? Hello, everyone. I’m huimin from DP team. This is the first time I join this meeting and I want talk about an issue happended everyday recently. we can’t order the part successfully at 9:43 o’clock and there will be an error massage come out. I don’t know whether the front line (call center) has issue when they create new case at 9:43. It has no or just a little effect on our work but I hope it will be resolve soon. Thanks for your listening and have a good day. What is your plan for 2017? The most important thing is that I will do my best in my career and always has the same attitude on the work. Strengthen self-discipline and personal ability. I’m really interested in English from October 2016 so at that time I have settled a clear goals on learning English. more concentrate on the communication skill and the writing skill. I will do my best.

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Could anybody help me correct this ?

Hello, everyone. I’m huimin from DP team.
This is the first time I'm joining this meeting and I want talk about an issue happended daily recently.
we can’t (order the part)I don't understand this part successfully at 9:43 o’clock and an error message will appear.
I don’t know whether the front line (call center) has issue when they create new case at 9:43.
It has little to no effect on our work but I hope it will be resolved soon.

Thanks for your listening and have a good day.

What is your plan for 2017?
The most important thing is that I will do my best in my career and always have the same attitude on the work:
Strengthen, self-discipline and personal ability.
I was really interested in English from October 2016 so at that time I have settled a clear goals on learning English.
more concentrate on the communication skills and the writing skills.
I will do my best.
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Could anybody help me correct this ?

Hello, everyone. I’m Huimin from DP team.
This is the first time I have joined this meeting and I want talk about an issue that happened recently.
We can’t order a part successfully at 9:43 o’clock and there will be an error massage come out.
I don’t know whether the front line (call center) has issue when they create new case at 9:43.

[NOT entirely sure what you mean to convey above]


It has no or just a little effect on our work but I hope it will be resolved soon.

Thanks for your listening and have a good day.

What is your plan for 2017?
The most important thing is that I will do my best in my career and always has have the same attitude on about the work.
Also, I'd like to strengthen self-discipline and personal ability. I’m really  I became really interested in English from  last October 2016 so at that time I have settled a clear  on the goal of  learning English, concentrating on communication skills and the writing skills.
I will do my best.


[Im guessing a bit. Let me know if thats not what you meant ;)]


Kila

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