Lisa life
On the sunning day,Lisa dated with her boyfriend,Peter.Peter treated her good,as long as they go out,he will buy many luxury good to satisfy Lisa desire.In the miidle of date,Peter recived a emergency call.He gave Lisa money let she could take taxi went home.Lisa didn't care Peter left her alone because she had bought many things.On the way going out department store,she saw the the clearance sale.She couldn't be appealed right away and joined the war.She rapidly grabbed an umbralla,two skirts,one pants and one doll.When she went out department store,it's rains and dogs outside,but she couldn't afford taxi money because it spent out on clearance sale.Luickly,she bought an umbralla just now.She graceful went out department store and taughted them didn't have umbralla.Beyond expectation,the umbralla made of paper.The umbralla got wet in the rain.Fortunately,Peter had finished work and picked up Lisa in time.Lisa felt Peter was so sweet and want to marry to him.
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Lisa's life
One the sunning sunny day, Lisa went on a date dated with her boyfriend, Peter. Peter treated her good well. ,as long as When they go out, he will buy many luxury good things (or expensive gifts) to satisfy Lisa's desire.In the miidle middle of the date, Peter received an emergency call. He gave Lisa money let so that she could take a taxi went home. Lisa didn't care that Peter had left her alone because she had bought many things. On the way going out of a department store, she saw the the clearance sale. She couldn't be appealed wasn't interested right away, and however then joined the war (war over items or scramble for items?). She rapidly grabbed an umbrella, two skirts, one pair of pants and one doll. When she went out of the department store, it's it was rains raining cats and dogs outside, but she couldn't afford a taxi money because it she had spent out it all at the clearance sale. Luickly, she had just bought an umbrella just now. She gracefully went out of the department store and taughted them (laughed at those who or teased those that) didn't have an umbrella. Beyond expectation, Unexpectedly, the umbrella was made of paper. The umbrella got wet in the rain. Fortunately, Peter had finished work and picked up Lisa in time. Lisa felt that Peter was so sweet and wanted to marry to him.0
Great story, haha!
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