My day
I go to my college from Monday till Friday. The college and school is a places where I can get some knowledge. The college can give more kniwledge than school. I didn't love school very much.
Our lessons at the college starts at 8:30 a.m. and lasts till 3 p.m. I go to home after the lessons. I am resting at home because I am usually tired after the lessons.
I go to a church in evening sonetimes. Here we worships to God, prays and listeings interesting, useful sermons.I love my church and friends of the church.
I have parties with my friend often. I go to bed later, because I am sleepy usually.
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My day
I go to my college from Monday to Friday. Both my college and school are places where I can gain some knowledge. However, I am able to learn more only in college but not in school. I don't really love my school very much.
Our lessons at the college start at 8:30 a.m. and end at 3 p.m. After that, I return home. I would take a rest at home because I am usually tired after the lessons.
I go to the church in the evening sometimes. We would worship to God, pray and listen to interesting and useful sermons preached by the minister. I love my church and also the friends I have met there.
I often have parties with my friend. I go to bed later, because I am sleepy usually.
Should be: I seldom go out partying with my friends, as I usually feel sleepy at around X o'clock, I don't want to go to bed late.
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