New year holidays
I had new year holiday in my company. The holiday was for 1week. So I traveled in Melbourne at Australia.
I went great ocean road, I get on a tram (it's like a train) etc..
Sometimes it's not good wether in there but totally I got a great time.
If I get a next chance, I want to go Sydney.
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New year holidays
I had a 1 week new year holiday, so I traveled to Melbourne in Australia.(If possible, you should combine small sentences together. Otherwise, your writing can sound/look choppy.)I traveled on the Great Ocean Road, (capitalize the name of the road)I got on a tram (it's like a train) etc..
Sometimes, the weather wasn't very good, but I had a great time nonetheless.("nonetheless" means that even though the weather wasn't always nice, you still had a good time)
If I get the chance, I want to go to Sydney next.
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