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My local city. . . My local city. . . When people ask me where I live, I replay that I live in the most beautiful city of the world. I live there since I was ten years old, now I’m thirty and I have to admit the city is deeply changed. However still now you can walk surrounding by lots of huge and ancient monuments. Who did not know the Colosseo or the Saint Peter Church? These are just two examples of hundreds of wonderful place to visit if you would come in my city. If you like the art galleries you can’t choice which one you have to see at first because there are about two hundreds ones around the city. Don’t you like art or historical places? don’t worried, in this city you can find a huge variety of modern art and lively places to visit as well. Saturdays night I love to go to Trastevere with my friends because there are lots of pubs with modern music and jazz music too. Usually in the morning people like sleep longer but, if you want, every second Sunday of every months you can choose to visit museums for free. I think it’s a great opportunity. Last month, for example, I visit “Palazzo Spada” where is a important gallery made by Bernini. I’m sure you’ve guessed where I live, but if you are still unsure, I’ll just tell you now: I live in Rome, the capital of Italy. If you don’t believe to my words, come here and then tell me if I’m true.

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When people ask me where I live, I replay reply that I live in the most beautiful city of in the world.
I live there have lived here since I was ten years old; now I’m thirty and I have to admit the city is deeply changed. However, still now you can still walk surrounded by lots of huge and ancient monuments. Who did does not know the Colosseo or the Saint Peter Church?
These are just two examples of hundreds of wonderful places to visit if you would come in come to my city. If you like the art galleries you can’t choice won't be able to choose which one you have to see at first to see first because there are about two hundreds ones of them around the city.
Don’t you like art or historical places? Don’t worried worry, in this city you can find a huge variety of modern art and lively places to visit as well.
Saturdays nights I love to go to Trastevere with my friends because there are lots of pubs with modern music and jazz music too. Usually in the morning people like to sleep longer but, if you want, every second Sunday of every months you can choose to visit museums for free. I think it’s a great opportunity. Last month, for example, I visited “Palazzo Spada” where there is an important gallery made by Bernini.
I’m sure you’ve guessed where I live, but if you are still unsure, I’ll just tell you now: I live in Rome, the capital of Italy.
If you don’t believe to my words me, come here and then tell me if I’m true right.
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My local city [alternativel:, "My city" or "My home town"]. . .

My local city. . .
When people ask me where I live, I replay reply that I live in the most beautiful city of in the world.
I have lived here there since I was ten years old., n Now I’m thirty and I have to [alternative:  "must admit"] admit the city is deeply [or "very"] changed. However still now y You can, however, still walk surroundeding by lots of [probably better than "lots of" in this context is "many"] huge and ancient monuments. Who did does not know the Colosseo [Colosseum] or the Saint Peter Church Basilica?
These are just two examples of hundreds of wonderful place to visit if you would ["would is correct if you are entreating someone to come; "if you come" just sets the possibility and is probably what you intend; "if you should come" could also be used] come in my city. If you like the art galleries, you can’t choice won't be able to choose which one you have to see at first because there are about two hundreds ones around the city.
Don’t you like art or historical places? dDon’t worryied, in this city you can find a huge variety of modern art and lively ["lively" might not be best for art and historical places] places to visit as well.
Saturdays nights I love to go to Trastevere with my friends because there are lots of pubs with modern music and jazz music too.  Usually in the morning people like sleep longer late.  bBut, if you want, every second Sunday of every months you can choose to visit museums for free. I think it’s a great opportunity. Last month, for example, I visit “Palazzo Spada” where there is a important Bernini gallery made by Bernini.
I’m sure you’ve guessed where I live, but if you are still unsure, I’ll just tell you now:. I live in Rome, the capital of Italy.
If you don’t believe meto my words, come here and then tell me if I told the truthI’m true.

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