My daily Today I woke up at six o'clock, I lifted off and I went straight take a shower, I left for work at six third, I take the train for work and still I take the bus. I arrived at work at seven-fi

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My daily Today I woke up at six o'clock, I lifted off and I went straight take a shower, I left for work at six third, I take the train for work and still I take the bus. I arrived at work at seven-fifty, I made coffee and when I started working it was already eight-twenty. I worked until noon and after I went to lunch, I got a little disappointed [emoji][emoji] today because I thought I was going to win a Christmas basket, anyway I did my part, left work at six o'clock and I got home at seven-ten.

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My daily entry

Today I woke up at six o'clock, I lifted off got up and I went straight to take a shower,. I left for work at six third thirty I take then took the train for/to work and still I had to take the bus. I arrived at work at seven-fifty(no hyphen, "-", is needed when stating times) ,/. I made coffee, and when I started working it was already eight-twenty.
I worked until noon and after I/then went to lunch,/. I got a little disappointed [emoji][emoji] today because I thought I was going to win a Christmas basket, anyway I did my part, left work at six o'clock and I got home at seven-ten.

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Well done "Wellington"! I was able to easily understand your point. Keep it up!

Taylor Goodwin-

P.S. I lived in NZ, Wainuiomata for two years. Cool to see a current Kiwi on here :)

My daily

Today I woke up at six o'clock. I got up and went straight into the shower. I left for work at six thirty, I have to take both the train and the bus to work. I arrived at work at seven-fifty. I made coffee, and when I started working it was already eight-twenty.
I worked until noon, then went to lunch. I was a little disappointed today because I thought I was going to win a Christmas basket, but I didn't win. I left work at six o'clock, and I got home at seven-ten.

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