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today1 I got up at 9 am. Sun was shining brightly. There were no clouds. The morning was promising. I washed up. I took my brunch. Then I spend some time on my computer surfing net and listening to music. My mom wanted to me to go with her to the field. She made me do some digging. After a while, my grand mom came to give us a hand. I spent all my afternoon there. When it was like mid day, weather suddenly took a turn, clouds filled the sky and cold wind started blowing. It got chilly suddenly. We hurried up and finished it at about 4 pm. No sooner had we finished it, rain started pouring down. We hurried to our home. We drank some tea and got our self cozy. My dad he came back to home form his work. My mom made dinner. After dinner I spend some time on my computer.

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thank you guys. I really appreciate it.

today1

Jan. 1

I got up at 9 am. The sun was shining brightly and there were no clouds. The morning was promising. I washed up. I took my brunch. I washed up, ate my brunch, and then I (remove 'I') spent some time on my computer surfing the net and listening to music.
My mom wanted to me to go with her to the field. She made me do some digging. After a while, my grand mom came to give us a hand. I spent all my afternoon there. When it was like mid day, weather suddenly took a turn, clouds filled the sky and cold
wind started blowing. It got chilly suddenly. We hurried up and finished it at about 4 pm. No sooner had we finished it, rain started pouring down. We hurried to our home. We drank some tea and got our self cozy. My dad he came back to home form his work. My mom made dinner. After dinner I spend some time on my computer.

today1

I got up at 9 am. The sun was shining brightly. There were no clouds. The morning was promising. I washed up.
I ate my brunch (Brunch usually happens in the late morning or on a weekend, it is a very "lazy" breakfast and it is usually a large plate. I would probably say breakfast here.). Then I spend spent some time on my computer surfing the net and listening to music.
My mom wanted to me to go with her to the field. She made me do some digging. After a while, my grand mom grandma or grandmother came to give us a hand. I spent all my afternoon there. When it was like mid day, the weather suddenly took a turn, clouds filled the sky and it got cold
wind started blowing. It got chilly suddenly. We hurried up and finished it at about 4 pm. No sooner had we (I would use "as soon as we finished" instead of "no sooner had we finished" finished it, rain started pouring down. We hurried to our home. We drank some tea and got made our self cozy. My dad he came back to home form his work. My mom made dinner. After dinner I spend spent some time on my computer.

Good job Reece!

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