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"Santa doesn't exist". . . Las week in Rome, at the end of a wonderful Christmas show, the orchestra leader of one of the most famous orchestras said loud: "Santa Claus doesn't exist" In front of him there were thousands of sons and severals of them started crying. Mothers and fathers were ashamed and anger at the same time. Immediately they protested against the conductor and wrote on Facebook they were not agree with that words. In few hours blew up a huge argument with thousands comments on the websites. The and of all was that the Auditorium where the show were done the next day published a post where it said that Santa Claus exist (you can see the post at the end of the page) and that orchestra leader had been changed with another one.

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"Santa doesn't exist". . .

Las week in Rome, at the end of a wonderful Christmas show, the orchestra conductor of one of the most famous orchestras said aloud:
"Santa Claus doesn't exist"
In front of him there were thousands of sons and severals of them started crying. Mothers and fathers were ashamed and angry at the same time. Immediately they protested against the conductor and wrote on Facebook they didn't agree with that words. In few hours  a huge argument blew up with thousands of comments on the websites.
The and of all was that the Auditorium where the show had been the next day a post was published where it said that Santa Claus existed (you can see the post at the end of the page) and that orchestra leader had been changed with another one.


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The previous correction is good! I have one additional correction:


In front of him there were thousands of sons children and several of them started crying. 

(sons = figli maschi)


(oops!  I see this was already corrected! Sorry :))

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