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Writers and readers. I've thinking about how powerful and amazing is the conection between a writer and a reader. Sometimes I feel envy about how they can make me fly and stimulate my imagination, and it's possible because they have an amazing power, they are like gods and they can create everything they want: creatures, lifes and even worlds. I would love to do the same one day. I would like to make the people live things in the same way that I thought them. Writers make us live lifes they usually would like to have. And for a moment, they and us,we're in another world, a perfect one,which is unreal, at least for our planet, but not for our imagination.

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Writers and readers.

I've been thinking about how powerful and amazing the connection between a writer and a reader is.
Sometimes I feel envy about how they can make me fly and stimulate my imagination, and it's possible because they have an amazing power, they are like gods and they can create anything they want: creatures, lives, and even worlds.
I would love to do the same one day. I would like to make people live things in the same way that I thought them.
Writers make us live lives they usually would like to have. And for a moment, we along with them are in another world, a perfect one, which is unreal, at least for our planet, but not for our imagination.
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Writers and readers.

I've  thinking  I'm thinking OR I have been thinking about how powerful and amazing is the connection between a writer and a reader.
Sometimes I feel envy about how they can make me fly and stimulate my imagination, and it's possible because they have an amazing power, they are like gods and they can create everything they want: creatures, lifes lives and even worlds.* 
I would love to do the same one day. I would like to make the people live things in the same way that as I thought them.
Writers make us live lifes lives they usually would like to have. And for a moment, they and us, we're in another world, a perfect one, which is unreal, at least for our planet, but not for our imagination.

*Check to see if long sentences can be broken into multiple sentences. Its easier for the reader to comprehend.

Youre awesome!  I  hope I will become as good a writer in the languages Im learning!

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