The Stranger. Part 3. The new hard task. Please, correct my mistakes.
Damien goes on to be in the parallel world, trying to defend the Green Island.
It's the middle of winter now. Port Town's dockyard goes on building one battle frigate after another. It's the compelled step,because the bloodest enemy offers us slavery or death. There is the strongest reason that I say "us" I totally consider myself to the Green Island, despites the fact that I was born in the concrete jungle somewhere beyond this world. I don't want to return to that crappy technological rubbish where humans become apes. Now I know where my Motherland is. So let's return to the story. "Liberty of death" that's what Islanders respond to the rivals. The great battle was unavoidable.
As usual today I wake up early in the morning. There isn't any work expecting me for all day, so I have free time to walk.
"Good morning, Islander!" Lisa says to me. I feel she always knows where I am. Islander? Maybe she also feels my mind and my thought, because I just wrote about that.
"What will we do today?" I ask.
"For last days you've reached the incredible progress. If you go on to work hard you would be promoted to the warrior. So listen for your today's goal. You should swimming till the sand coast."
"Are you scoffing? The snow is falling, it's winter now! There's about a mile of swimming till the sand coast."
"As I just told, you've reached the impressive result for these days. Besides you can overcome the frost better than any other. You may begin the training right now" Lisa says to me with a smile on her face.
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The Stranger. Part 3. The new hard task. Please, correct my mistakes.
Damien goes on to be in the parallel world, trying to defend the Green Island.Now it's winter. The dockyard of the port city builds a battle frigate after another. It is the obligatory step, because the most sanguinary enemy offers us slavery or death. There is the strongest reason that I say "we" consider myself totally to the green island, despites the fact that I was born in the concrete jungle somewhere beyond this world. I do not want to go back to that damn technological junk where humans become apes. Now I know where my country is. Let's go back to history. "Freedom of death" is what the islanders respond to their rivals. The great battle was inevitable.
As usual today I wake up early in the morning. There is no work waiting for me all day, so I have free time to walk.
"Good morning, insular!" Lisa tells me. I feel like he always knows where I am. Islander? Maybe it also feels my mind and my thinking, because I just wrote about it.
"What are we going to do today?" I ask.
"During the last few days you made incredible progress, if you go to work hard you will be promoted to the warrior, so listen to the objective today, you should swim to the sand coast."
The snow is falling, now it is winter, there is a mile to swim to the sandy shore.
"As I just said, you have achieved the impressive result, these days, you can also overcome the frost better than any other. You can start the workout now, " Lisa tells me with a smile on her face.
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