Please check the grammar and the structure of sentences ^_^ Ken & his friend like hiking. They heard someone screaming behind the bushes . They decided to help , but when they arrived a murderer had

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Please check the grammar and the structure of sentences ^_^ Ken & his friend like hiking. They heard someone screaming behind the bushes . They decided to help , but when they arrived a murderer had already killed the ranger by a handgun. Ken grabbed his cell phone cautiously & took a picture of the murderer. Ken's phone rang & the murderer saw them. They realized the gravity of the situation. Ken squeezed his friend's hand & ran away . He tried to call the police countless times,but they couldn't reach there because of rough terrain. The murderer was screaming that he would spare them if they didn't tell the police.The next day, Ken & his friend heard from the news that the police caught someone & searching for eyewitnesses. Ken decided to uncover the truth. His friend was on board. When they went to the police station, Ken's friend reconsider the idea of telling the police . He was afraid and ran away . Ken told the officer all the story , but he didn't believe him , but the upside he had a tangible evidence, the picture on his friend's phone. When Ken asked his friend about that picture he denyed any recollection about it . The next day the murderer got out, he was searching for Ken & his friend. Ken resents his friend for not telling the police.

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Please check the grammar and the structure of sentences ^_^

Ken and his friend were hiking. They heard someone screaming behind the bushes. They decided to help, but when they arrived, a murderer had already killed a ranger by a handgun. Ken cautiously grabbed his cell phone & took a picture of the murderer. Ken's phone rang, & the murderer saw them. The two friends realized the gravity of the situation. Ken squeezed his friend's hand & ran away. He tried to call the police countless times, but he couldn't get through to them. He also couldn't reach the station because of rough terrain. The murderer was screaming that he would spare them if they didn't tell the police.

The next day, Ken & his friend heard from the news that the police caught someone & were searching for eyewitnesses. Ken decided to uncover the truth. His friend was on board. When they went to the police station, Ken's friend reconsidered the idea of telling the police. He was afraid and ran away. Ken told the officer the whole story, but the officer didn't believe him. The upside was that Ken had a tangible evidence: the picture on his friend's phone. When Ken asked his friend about that picture, he denied any recollection of it The next day the murderer got out. He was searching for Ken & his friend. Ken resented his friend for not telling the police.

Watch your spaces. There is a space after punctuation and not before. Also, place your adverbs as close as possible to the word they are modifying. Make sure your pronoun usage is clear. i.e. make sure the reader can easily tell who "he" or "it" is. Finally, just make sure your flow of ideas makes sense. I greatly modified some of your sentences to make them more logical. Clarity is a part of grammar.

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