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My neat notes Yesterday I tidied books in my room.There were too many books that the bookshelf could hold them all.A part of them were bought for test.Also,I found my notes that had taken when I was in high school. These notes were very neat and I should have sold them out.Once I had been proud of them but no more now.Because I realized that I had valued neatness more than their contents. I should have used notes to help me understand and remember what teachers said. Never put the cart before a horse.

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My neat notes

Yesterday I tidied up the books in my room.  There were too many books that the bookshelf couldn't hold them all.  Some of them were bought for tests.  Also, I found my notes that I had taken when I was in high school. These notes were very neat and I should have sold them out.  Once I was proud of them but not anymore now.  Because I realized now that I had valued their neatness more than their contents. I should have used the notes to help me understand and remember what the teachers said. Never put the cart before the horse.

Don't forget spaces after periods & commas.

Great job with this entry.  And you are right, you should "never put the cart before the horse".

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