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What a day Yesterday was my birthday and it was a wonderful day. While I was sleeping, my husband made breakfast and when I woke up he gave me a beautiful bouquet of red roses. All of sudden, somebody knocked the door. It was my grandmother for to congratulate me and I was very happy when I saw her. In the evening, I went with my husband at the cinema and after that, we went to dinner to my favorite restaurant. While we were eating the dessert, I saw to our best friends Marcos and Paola. When we went out of the restaurant, we met with them and we went to a pub to have a few drinks together. All evening was very fun and we laughed very much remembering past times. What an exciting day!

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What a day

Yesterday was my birthday and it was a wonderful day.
While I was sleeping, my husband made breakfast and when I woke up he gave me a beautiful bouquet of red roses.
All of sudden, somebody knocked at the door. It was my grandmother for coming to congratulate me and I was very happy when I saw her.
In the evening, I went with my husband at to the cinema (in the USA we say instead "to the movies") and after that, we went to dinner toat my favorite restaurant.
While we were eating the dessert, I saw to our best friends Marcos and Paola. When we went out of left the restaurant, we met with them and we went to a pub to have a few drinks together.
All evening was very fun and we laughed very much remembering past times.
What an exciting day!
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Yesterday was my birthday and it was a wonderful day. While I was sleeping, my husband made breakfast and when I woke up he gave me a beautiful bouquet of red roses. All of sudden, somebody knocked at the door. It was my grandmother coming over to congratulate me and I was very happy when I saw her. In the evening, my husband and I went to the cinema, and after that we went to my favorite restaurant for dinner. While we were eating the dessert, I saw two of our best friends, Marcos and Paola. When we went out of the restaurant, we met them and all of us went to a pub to have a few drinks together. All evening was very fun and we laughed very much when remembering past times. What an exciting day!

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