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I wonder if i continue to eat mum's cuisine like this I'll be fat. I ate lot of food every time. Mum's cuisine is too delicious to stop my appetite. My mother will cook delicious food today, tomorrow, day after tomorrow. I decide to eat according to my appetite during the Year-end and New Year holidays. And I decide to do on diet next year.

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I wonder . . . i If i continue to eat mum's* cuisine cooking like this I'll be will I get fat?.**

I ate eat lot of food every all of the time.
Mum's cuisine is too delicious to stop my appetite.
My mother will cook delicious food today, tomorrow, and the day after tomorrow.
I decide will try to eat according to my appetite during the Year-end and New Year holidays.
And I'll go decide to do on a diet next year.***

* "Mum" tends to be only used in Great Britain. In America, we tend to say "Mom." 

** I changed the title into a question. But it would also work well if you omit the words "I wonder." Also, remember that in a title, all the important words should be capitalized.

*** 頑張って！It's good that Soba is so healthy!

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I wonder, if I continue to eat mum's cuisine like this, will I get fat?

I always eat lot of food.
Mum's cuisine is too delicious to stop my appetite.
My mother will cook delicious food today, tomorrow, and the day after tomorrow.
I've decided to eat according to my appetite during the Year-end and New Year's holidays.
And I decided to go on a diet next year.
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I wonder whether, if I continue to eat mum's cuisine like this, I'll get fat. [you use capital "I" to refer to yourself even in the middle of a sentence. :). Also, this is a good example of the difference between "if" and "whether". Here, as is often the case, "whether" is short for "whether or not"].

I eat a lot of food every time.
Mum's cuisine is too delicious for me to resist giving in to my appetite.
My mother will cook delicious food today, tomorrow, and the day after tomorrow.
I've decided to eat according to my appetite during the Year-end and New Year holidays.
And I've decided to go on a diet next year.

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