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Writing about the futrue I think it is a difficult task to write about the future, because no-one can really know what the future will be like. Some people try: especially scientists, politicians, economist and all kinds of fortune-tellers for very different reasons. As far it concerns me, I see the future neither optimistic nor pessimistic. Every pro has a con, hasn't it? For example technological progress had and still has a big influence to our lives. Although the lives of the privileged have become more and more convenient not everyone profits from technical achievements. In particular people don't in the third world.

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Writing about the futrue ture

I think it is a difficult task to write about the future, because no-one can really know what the future will be like. Some people try: especially scientists, politicians, economists and all kinds of fortune-tellers for very different reasons. As far it concerns me, I see the future neither optimistic nor pessimistic. Every pro has a con, doesn't hasn't it? For example, technological progress had and still does have(preference) has a big influence to  in our lives. Although, the lives of the privileged have become more and more convenient, not everyone profits from technical achievements. In particular, people  who live don't in the third world.*

 Great Job

*: Since you are writing about difference for this sentence, the sentence before this one is the a person who speaks English, will/ can understand easily. Now, if you wanted to emphasis that people who live in less industrialized countries, don't benefit from advances in technology, you could write industrialized nations/ 1st world countries.you could  " In particular, people who don't live in 1st world/ industrialized nations.

Nicole

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Writing about the future

I think it is a difficult task to write about the future, because no-one can really know what the future will be like. Some people try: especially scientists, politicians, economist and all kinds of fortune-tellers for very different reasons. As far it concerns me, I view the future neither with optimism nor pessimism. Every pro has a con, hasn't it? For example, technological progress had and still has a big influence on our lives. Although the lives of the privileged have become more and more convenient not everyone profits from technical achievements, in particular people  in the third world.

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Writing about the futrue future

I think it is a difficult task to write about the future, because no-one can really know what the future will be like. Some people try: especially scientists, politicians, economist and all kinds of fortune-tellers for very different reasons. As far it concerns me, I see the future neither optimistic nor pessimistic. Every pro has a con, hasn't it? For example technological progress had and still has a big influence to our lives. Although the lives of the privileged have become more and more convenient, not everyone profits from technical achievements. In particular, people don't in the third world.


Nearly Perfect! :) Great job!

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