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Can you correct me? Hi people!! Now here is 12.31 pm and Im so hungry!! In 30 minuts I`m going to have lunch. Today I will have some pastas, some salads and a chocolate for dessert. Before have lunch I return to my job and before I think I go to the shopping to buy somethings to take to the beach, because tomorow i will go to the coast to spend the new year!! Thank you!

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Can you correct me?

Hi people!!
Now here It is now 12:31 pm here and I'm so hungry!! In 30 minutes, I'm going to have lunch. Today, I will have some pastas,* some salads and a chocolate for dessert. Before After having lunch I and before returning to my job, and before** I think I will go to the shopping to buy some_things*** to take to the beach, because tomorow I*** will go to the coast to spend the New Year!!****

Thank you!

*Pasta and salad are uncountable, so no 's', unless you're talking about different types of pastas and saladsat the same time (spaghetti, linguine, macaroni, etc.)

**I don't understand the order of the actions here, are you shopping before lunch or before going back to work (but after lunch)?

***"Something" is a single, unidentified "thing". In this case, you are buying a few things/items so "some things"

***The personal pronoun "I" is always capitalized.

****New Year's Day/Eve is a specific holiday, so it's capitalized.



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Can you correct me?

Hi people!!

Now it's 12:31 pm here and I'm so hungry!! In 30 minutes I'm going to have lunch. Today I will have some pasta, some salad, and chocolate for dessert. Before I have lunch, I will return to my job. Also, I think I will go to the shopping area to buy some things to take to the beach because tomorrow I will go to the coast to spend the New Year!!

Thank you!

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Can you correct me?

Hi people!!
It is 12:31 pm here right now and I'm  so hungry!! In 30 minutes I'm  going to have my lunch. Today I am going  have some pastas, some salads and a chocolate for dessert. After I have my lunch I will return to my office and after that  I will go shopping to buy some things to take to the beach because tomorrow  I will go to the coast to spend the new year!!

Thank you!
1

Hi people!!

Now here it is 12.31 PM and I am so hungry!! In 30 minutes I am going to have lunch. Today I will have some pastas, a salad and a chocolate for dessert. Before having lunch, I return to my job and I think I will also go to the shopping mall to buy some things to take to the beach. Tomorrow i will go to the coast to spend new years eve!!

Thank you!

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