Building in my city

I live in a small town; is there are very few buildings and they are not high tall (usually "tall" is used for buildings, not "high"), perhaps they only have about 15 floors. In Brazil, there are several cities with many high tall and beautiful buildings (add "s" for plural); in which this can be with which either have concrete or glass walls (this helps to condense your ideas so it sounds concise and better) and some still to be glass. There are older buildings that are more rustic and even the most sophisticated, where which (referring to people, "engineers") engineers They built that who (use "who" with people, such as engineers) had to have a lot of creativity, knowledge, and dedication. In newer cities, the most modern buildings take over the whole scenery/landscape ("scenario" is a situation, a view would be scenery or you can use landscape) where visitors are dazzled by the grandeur of this 20th century work (the scenery/landscape is collective, it is viewed as one piece of art, so it would be "work of art" instead of "works of art") of art. Hong Kong is the city with the most skyscrapers in the world after the US and Brazil. It There is very little room for the building but it still fascinates those who like architecture and civil engineering. The tallest structures in Brazil (excluding antennas) are mostly located in São Paulo. Of the 10 buildings, 5 are in the land of drizzle. However, they do not compare to the tallest buildings in the world. The Burj Khalifa is the world's largest building at 828 meters tall, while the largest building in Brazil, Lookout Valley, measuring 170 meters.

Good job overall.  Be careful for units of measure since the US does not use the metric system we would use feet instead of meters for the height of buildings.  You only had a few vocabulary mistakes and some difficulty with relative pronouns such as "which, who, that".