Practice sentence
Hello,nice to meet you.My name is kaito. I am a japanese high school student. My birthday is April 6th 1998,now 18.
i'm interested in english,especially speak and write with native.But there aren't little apotunity in around my life.
thank you looking my article. :)
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Practice sentence
Hello, nice to meet you. My name is (3)Kaito. I am a japanese high school student. My birthday is April 6th,1998, now I am(5) 18.I'm interested in (7)English, especially speaking(10) and writing(11) with native. There aren't many(13) opportunities(14) in my life.thank you for looking at my article. :)
Nice job! Here is why I made my corrections:
1 + 2 + 4 + 8. A space must follow any form of punctation (like a period, comma, question mark, etc...)
3+8. All pronouns must be capitalized.
5. Age must be told with a state of being. Saying "now 18," does not address who or what is 18. Using the state of being, "I am," will address this.
6. Beginning letter of every sentence must be capitalized.
9 + 10. Present progressive must be used for ongoing actions, for you are continuing to want to speak with a native.
11. "But," is a word that continues a sentence. Placing a period at the end means the end of the action, so one cannot use But to start the sentence because that means the action is continuing. OTHER CORRECT WAYS TO WRITE: (writing with native, but there...) OR (writing with a native; but there...)
12. You just used a double negative, so what you were trying to say was opposite. Using aren't makes the little mean "many." It changes the meaning of the word and makes it opposite.
13. Incorrect spelling. Also, the word must be plural because you are talking about multiple chances, not one.
14. Get rid of the word around. In and around both describe the place of these opportunities, and they each have a different meaning. In, meaning a part of your life, and around, indicates every now and then.
15. No indicator of why you're thanking us. Needs to be used when saying what someone has done. (There are different indicators)
16. No indicator of what we are looking at. Same as number 13.
ADVANCED COMMENT: (in purple)
When saying the date, here is the outline: (Month day, year) A comma must always follow the day.
Nice job! Hopefully you can improve with these comments :)
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Practice sentence
Hello,nice to meet you.My name is kaito. I am a japanese high school student. My birthday is April 6th 1998,Im 18 now.i'm interested in english,especially in speaking and writing with natives. But there aren't much opportunities around my life.
thank you for looking at my article. :)
Hey Kaito! Im not a native english speaker but i tried to do some corrections! If you need a partner to practise, Im totally avaible!!
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Practice sentence
Hello,nice to meet you.My name is kaito. I am a japanese high school student. My birthday is April 6th 1998,now 18.i'm interested in english,especially speak and write with native.But there aren't little apotunity in around my life.
thank you looking my article. :)
Hello, nice to meet you. My name is Kaito. I am a Japanese high school student. My birthday is April 6th 1998. I'm now 18. I'm interested in English, especially speaking and writing with natives. But there aren't many opportunities in my life. Thank you for looking my article.
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