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please correct my essay! Do You Prefer to Live with A Host Family or Campus Dormitory? Students in my university study abroad every year. When I study abroad, I will choose live with a host family or campus dormitory. In my case, I prefer to live a campus dormitory, and there are two reasons. First, campus dormitory is near or in the university, so I can save time. According to a senior student at the same club, his university had a large amount of homework, so people who live far from the university had a hard time because they don’t have time to complete homework, but he lived in a university dormitory, so he spent only four or five minutes to go to a classroom. Not only studying, when it comes to hanging out with friends, living a dormitory has an advantage. For example, when I want to hang out with friends, it takes long time if I live with a host family. On the contrary, if I live a dormitory, there are lots of friends, so it is easy to go out with them. That’s why, living a dormitory can utilize the time. Second, if I live a dormitory, I can make friend and join a party easily. For instance, one of the most common troubles at studying abroad is making friend. When you study abroad, you usually go foreign country alone, so there is no acquaintance at first. At that time, if you have a roommate and you can make friend soon, you will be able to make more new friends soon. In addition, if you live with a host family, there is no friend, so it takes longer time to make friend. According to my brother, there is a lot of parties in foreign country especially on weekends. Then, I can participate in the party whenever I want to do so and I don’t have to care about curfew. However, if I live with a host family, I shouldn’t be too late because when I’m too late, I have no choice but make a member of host family get up to unlock the door or stay out until the family get up. Moreover, when the party is held at dormitory but I live with a host family, I have to pay attention not to be involved in an accident on the way to home and event venue. Therefore, living a dormitory can develop your friendship. In conclusion, I prefer to live a dormitory because I can save money and I can make friend soon. That means I can utilize the time and enjoy my studying abroad life.

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