Dreadlocks=Vegan? I used to have dreadlocks two years ago. I shaved my hair, which was very short such as 3 mm afterwards Eventually, my hair has got longer in tow years. Therefore, I have made dreadl

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Dreadlocks=Vegan? I used to have dreadlocks two years ago. I shaved my hair, which was very short such as 3 mm afterwards Eventually, my hair has got longer in tow years. Therefore, I have made dreadlocks on my head again since three days ago. Aside from my ex and present hairstyle, I talked about various hairstyles to someone. I totally forgot the exact date when and whom I spoke with. But, when we were conversing, I mentioned my dreadlocks that I used to have. Someone replied ; 'So, you must have been a vegan.' I answered 'What!? (I was surprised at the word.) and 'Why? (I did not believe that he/ she said.)' Finally, the answer I understood was people with dreadlocks must be vegans. It was very very interesting to me. I used to be a vegetarian, but unfortunately hardly a vegan, although I do not often eat meat. I do not even smoke. If you meet people with dreadlocks in the future, they would not be vegans. It is sort of a tip to pay attention that you should not judge based on someone's appearance.

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Hi, I enjoyed reading this story, which is very funny.

I noticed a few mistakes in the way you talk about the past, which I've marked with a *. I also noticed a few places where you misuse "it" and "this/that", which is a common error. Just a few things to keep in mind :)

Good work!

Hannah

Dreadlocks=Vegan?

I used to have dreadlocks two years ago. Then* I shaved my hair, which so that it was very short: such as 3 mm afterwards! Eventually, my hair has got grew* longer in two tow years. Therefore, three days ago* I have made dreadlocks on my head again since three days ago.

Aside from my ex and present hairstyle, I talked about various hairstyles to someone. I talked about various hairstyles to someone, including my former and present hairstyle. I totally forgot have completely forgotten* the exact date when and with whom I spoke with. But, when we were conversing, I mentioned my the dreadlocks that I used to have. Someone replied:

"So, you must have been a vegan."

I answered: "What!?" (I was surprised at the word.) and "Why?" (I did not believe that what he/ she said.)

Finally, the answer I understood was that they believed that people with dreadlocks must be vegans. It This was very very interesting to me. I used to be a vegetarian, but unfortunately hardly a vegan, although I do not often eat meat. I do not even smoke.

If you meet people with dreadlocks in the future, they would might not be vegans. It This is sort of a tip to pay attention, because that you should not judge someone based on their someone's appearance.

Dreadlocks=Vegan?

Two years ago, I used to have dreadlocks two years ago. I shaved my hair, which was very short afterwards, such as about 3 mm. afterwards Eventually, My hair has gotten longer over the past two years. Therefore, I have made dreadlocks on my head again since three days ago.
Aside from my ex and present hairstyle, I talked about various hairstyles to someone. I totally forgot the exact date and with whom I spoke with. But, when we were conversing, I mentioned my dreadlocks that I used to have. Someone They replied: 'So, you must have been a vegan.' I answered: 'What!? (I was surprised at the word.) and 'Why? (I did not believe that he/ she said.)'
Finally, from their answer I understood was that people with dreadlocks must be vegans. It was very very interesting to me. I used to be a vegetarian, but unfortunately, hardly a vegan, although I do not often eat meat. I do not even smoke.
If you meet people with dreadlocks in the future, they would may or may not be vegans. It is sort of a tip to pay attention that you should not judge based on someone's appearance.

I am wondering if someone suitably correct my writing. If you have time to do it, it would be really appreciated.

Hi, Marc. Thanks for your comment. Unfortunately, the person was not kidding me. She slightly blamed me that I wasn't vegan at that time, haha. Otherwise, I have met many many old-mindset people while travelling; I left Japan in 2012. So, I have been abroad about for 5 years. To be honest, I sometimes get used to answer the suitable answer to them, haha. For example, people do not know the difference among Korea, China and Japan, haha.But, It is a long long story... Anyway, thank you :)

I used to be a vegetarian, but unfortunately hardly a vegan, in addition* I do not still often eat meat.

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