Why people attend to college? Toefl essay
As our world has been evolved from decade to decade and many issues that we were used to in the past have completely changed during our lives, there’s one traditional process that has not been changed: the decision to attend college or university.
The traditional path is clear to everyone; when a youngster finishs his high school, or military service in some countries, he immediately goes into a college or university to get his diploma or degree. Nowadays, the benefits that students get from college or university have became a controversial issue and have raised a serious question: why people rush to attend college?
A first explanation for this phenomenon would be the willingness of students to get a certificate for work. Nowadays, many workplaces require a written proof that one worker can really be a fittable excellent worker. As a result, the work market have caused students to believe that in order to apply to their dream job, they have to complete their degree in the best way.
Secondly, many students looking forward for college because it is a new fresh experience for them. College or university have become a social place, where students get to meet their best buddies and build their fresh relationships. It is considered a period that youngsters would never forget and this is clearly an incentive..
Last but not least, the herd effect is clearly influencing students to invest their time attending to colleges; this is something that everyone does. A parent that his son or daughter will not attend college will be considered as a failure. This pressure causes many students to attend even though they are not quite sure about the benefits they would gain from it.
College or university is a place that the human build for the benefit or the human beings. However, human beings are vary from each other and have to really look for the benefits that colleges or universities would give them.
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Why people attend to college? Toefl essay
As our world has been (use present perfect for change over time) evolved from decade to decade and (using and doesn't imply cause and effect but a comma does), many issues that we were used to faced with in the past have completely changed during our people's lives, but there’s one traditional process that has not been changed: the decision to attend college or university.The traditional path is clear to everyone; when a youngster finishes his high school, or military service in some countries, he or she immediately goes into a college or university to get his or her diploma or degree. Nowadays, the benefits that students get from college or university have became a controversial issue and have raised a serious question: why people rush to attend college? (great ending to this paragraph- very well written introductory paragraph)
A The first explanation for this phenomenon would be the willingness of students to get a certificate for work. Nowadays, many workplaces require a written proof that one a worker can really be an fittable (not a real word) excellent worker who will also be the right fit. As a result, the work market have has caused students to believe that in order to apply to their dream job, they have to complete their degree in the best way.
Secondly, many students looking forward for to college because it is a new, fresh experience for them. Colleges or and universities have become a social place, where students get to meet their best buddies and build their fresh first relationships. It is considered a period that when youngsters would will never forget and this is clearly an incentive.***I am including the second part in the comments because it was too long. :)
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