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A gift for Christmas Christmas is a family tradition,is an occasion to spend time with them.Concerning my family situation we couldn't be together.First of all like last year i had fever,flu, then i'm alone, i mean i had been separating since two years, no kids,my sister lives in Germany and my mother went there because she's having a baby, my brother divorced last year and so these days were very normal, but even i was week i gave a special gift to a young children ....I brush up my Santa suit which i used years ago and i did a special and amazing surprise to this little girl....Saturday night i knocked on the door of my friend's house, she didn't expected to see me.Well i told her all the things i knew,including that she loves playing piano,she was listening me very carefully,then i told her if i could sit,so we read the letter and finally together we opened her presents.She was very cute,educated and gave a special Christmas...!At the end i accepted four cookies for my reindeer which they were patiently waiting fot me on the roof......

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A gift for Christmas

Christmas is a family tradition, it is an occasion to spend time with them. Concerning my family situation we couldn't be together. First of all, last year I had fever and flu, then I'm alone because I have been separated two years, have no kids, my sister lives in Germany and my mother went there because she's having a baby, my brother divorced last year so these days were very normal. But even so, I  gave a special gift to a young child ....I brushed up my Santa suit which i used years ago and i gave a special and amazing surprise to this little girl....Saturday night i knocked on the door of my friend's house, she didn't expected to see me. Well i told her all the things i knew, including that she loves playing piano, she was listening to me very carefully, then i told her we should sit so we could read the letter and finally together open her presents.She was very cute,educated and gave me a special Christmas...!At the end i accepted four cookies for my reindeer which they were patiently waiting for me on the roof......


 Concerning my family situation we couldn't be together. This sentence is very awkward and not quite correct. Some other possibilities are, "My family couldn't be together together for a variety of reasons." or "As far as my family is  concerned, we could not be together."


 these days  - what days?

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