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Today is Monday. I have to work. I am sad. Yesterday was christmas. I went to eat hot pot with friends. It's very dilicious. we ate a lot of mutton and some vegetables. We were very full. After lunch, we went to the theater to see a movie. We planned to eat something else after the movie. But after the 3 hours, we were also full. so we went home.Until I was go to sleep, i didn't eat anything else. then i really knew how much i ate.
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Monday
Today is Monday. I have to work. I am sad. Yesterday was christmas. I went to eat hot pot with friends. It's very dilicious. we ate a lot of mutton and some vegetables. We were very full. After lunch, we went to the theater to see a movie. We planned to eat something else after the movie. But after the 3 hours, we were also full. so we went home.Until I was go to sleep, i didn't eat anything else. then i really knew how much i ate.Today is Monday and I have to work. It makes me so sad. Yesterday was Christmas. I went to eat hot pot with friends and it was delicious. We ate a bunch of mutton and vegetables until we couldn't hold anymore. After lunch we went to the theater to see a movie. We had planned to go out for another meal after the movie, but after 3 hours we were STILL full. We ended up going home. I was so full I didn't need to eat another bite before bed. I realized while I was lying there just how much I had eaten.
Haha!! I know the feeling so well! Great job!! I just made a few adjustments to make it sound more native. Just a different way to say some things! Let me know if you have any questions! :)
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Haha,eating to much is not good for your health and weight。In especial as a girl。LOL
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