How I spent my Christmas
It's been a while since my last essay. Actually, I've been busy on holidays. To be honest, I'm not religious, but I quite like Christmas. Without knowing why, it makes me happy. I spent my Christmas eve with my mom. We went to the movies and bought some stuff at the mall. There were hundreds and thousands of people, so it made me feel tired. As soon as we returned home, we had small party ourselves. We ate fried chicken, sushi, strawberry cake and so on. Next day, I spent my whole day watching all of the Harry Potter movies. It's my annual event. That's the end of my Christmas days. I hope I'll be able to write another essay about Luke's podcast after works.
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How I spent my Christmas
It's been a while since my last essay. Actually, I've been busy on holiday. To be honest, I'm not religious, but I quite like Christmas. Without knowing why, it makes me happy. I spent my Christmas eve with my mom. We went to the movies and bought some stuff at the mall. There were hundreds and thousands of people, so it made me feel tired. As soon as we returned home, we had small party ourselves. We ate fried chicken, sushi, strawberry cake and so on. Next day, I spent my whole day watching all the Harry Potter movies. It's my annual tradition. That's the end of my Christmastime*. I hope I'll be able to write another essay about Luke's podcast after work.*or, more commonly, ... end of my Christmas
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