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black day in my life 24/12/2016 is a black day in my life. That day i can't forget in my life forever. i lost my mobile .. that only 4 month old. that stolen by a thief in local train. i really fed on that moment. that was bought with so much ambitious. moreover i cant get enough time to use that phone. after awards i reached in my office where we celebrating christmas . i got a gift from my santa child. That's a ladies purse. Becose he though i was a lady. so he purchased a lady purse for me. after the celebration i left to my home. on the way a Tick checker caught me. i have a valid train ticket. i produced that. But he told me that is not in this route.That ticket was only for one route which indicated in the ticket. he fined 255rs to me. but i have only 100 rs. i told him sir i dont know about that. please forgive me. but he dint mind my words. after that i called to one of my friend who along with me in my home. he gave 255 rs to tick checker. then at 10 o clock i reached home. on that time i called to my friend. at that moment i noticed one thing, my ear phone is not working. ohh my god 24/12/2016 the balk saturday in my life. i lost mobile money my credibility everything. i can't imagine that day it scares me. i hove only one pray to my god. i dont want to face a day like that.

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black day in my life

24/12/2016 was a black day in my life. That day I can never forget. I lost my mobile. It was only 4 months old and stolen by a thief on a local train. I was really fed up at that moment. I had bought it with so many ambitions. I did not have enough time to use it. Later at the office we celebrated Christmas, Santa child gave me a gift of a ladies purse because he thought I was a lady. After that, I travelled home. On the way a ticket inspector caught me without a valid train ticket. We argued. He fined me 255 rs, but I had only 100 rs. We fought. Then I called one of my friends who gave me a lift home and also the 255 rs for the ticket inspector. At 10 o'clock I got home. Then I called my friend. At that moment i noticed one thing; my ear phone is not working. Oh, my God, 24/12/2016 was a black Saturday for me. I lost my mobile, money, and temper, everything. I cannot imagine that day without shuddering. I must pray to God not to face another day like that.

Very well written!

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sir i am not a rich person. i spend my 2 month salary for that mob. that have price around 15k. thats not a big cost for others rather than me. more over i bought that phone with a lot of ambitous. but faith is faith . i admited
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If that's the worst day of your life, you are a lucky man - some people have real problems to worry about. Be more careful with your phone next time!

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