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FCE Task (I need someone to correct it please): Application letter Nothing of what I write here is true, but one the the tasks to prepare for FCE exam is about this topic. We are supposed to be applying for a tou guide position. _____________________________________________________________________ Dear Sir or Madame, I contact you in relation to your advertisement of a tour guide position. I have always loved to travel and I have been to almost every place of the world. Therefore it would be a great opportunnity for me to work in this field. Although I do not have experience in this kind of job I think that my knowledge of english and several other languages could be very useful for the job. Since I speak spanish, italian and swedish too I could deal with costumers of very different nationalities in their own language. Besides I have already worked with people, as I was a waitress for a long time and I have been a shop assistant for several years and I usually get on very well with visitors, so I think I could do very well this job. I hope you will consider my application and I look forward to receiving a reply for you if you are interested. Yours sincerely, Angélica Gallego Narbón

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FCE Task (I need someone to correct it please): Application letter

Nothing of what I write here is true, but one the the tasks to prepare for FCE exam is about this topic. We are supposed to be applying for a tour guide position.
_____________________________________________________________________
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am contacting you in relation to your advertisement for the position of a Tour Guide. I have always loved to travel and I have been to almost every place in the world. Therefore it would be a great opportunnity for me to work in this field.

Although I do not have experience in this kind of job I think that my knowledge of English and several other languages could be very useful for the job. Since I speak Spanish, Italian and Swedish, too I could deal with costumers of very different various nationalities in their own language.

Besides I have already have experience of working with people, as I was a waitress for a long time and I have also been a shop assistant for several years. and I usually get on very well with visitors, so I think* believe that I could do very well in this job.
I hope you will consider my application and I look forward to receiving a reply from you if you are interested in me.

Yours sincerely,
Angélica Gallego Narbón

* It is more positive to say 'I believe' rather than 'think'. It makes you seem more confident about yourself.

Buen trabajo.

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