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Days ago,a history book which had been adapted caught my sight instantly.It shows us how a humble princess becomes a thoughtful woman who eventually takes the power.At first,she was innocent,lovely and carefree.As time went by,as her mother was struck in trap and deceased last,as her life encounterd so many setbacks,she realized the court's darkness,shade and something related to the power little by little.Therefore,she wished to escape the Forbidden City and could live a peaceful ,quiet ,homey life with her beloved man.Whereas,things converted its orbit beyond her expections.In the end,she took the charge of the whole dynasty on her own way and made the country more properous and safe.
Sometimes the fate would indeedly play trick on us.when you head for your dream,it doesn't obedient you.I think it must need you to do something signicant since you live in the this world.And you should look further not only in your circle.Remember,your presence doesn't an occasion.So,play it actively,boys!
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Really Thinking
Some days ago a history book which had been (adapted?) caught my sight instantly. It shows us how a humble princess becomes a thoughtful woman who eventually takes power. At first, she was innocent, lovely and carefree. As time went by, as her mother was struck in a trap and finally died, as her life encountered so many setbacks, she realized the court's dark side and something related to its power little by little. Therefore she wished to escape the Forbidden City and to live a peaceful ,quiet , homey life with her beloved man. In fact, things orbited beyond her expectations. In the end, she took charge of the whole dynasty in her own way and made the country more prosperous and safe.Sometimes fate does indeed play tricks on us. When you head for your dream, it doesn't obey you. I think it must need you to do something significant since you live in this world. And you should look further than your circle. Remember, your presence isn't an occasion. So, play it actively, boys!
Very well written but maybe a little puzzling in parts.
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