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Changes That Have Taken Place on My University Campus I have studied on my university campus for over three years and witnessed its gradual changes through these years. When I first came into this school, I thought I was entering a high school again – what a small campus! I toured around and it only took me less than an hour to visit every corner of the campus. During the first year, students went to a small house for shower and we had to leave our student card in exchange for a padlock used to lock our possessions. The charge was just 1.5 yuan and we could shower as long as we pleased. The dining halls then always served the same food and our choices were limited. However, now things are far different than before. More buildings have risen, including the Student Service Center and Student Activity Center. Moreover, An untapped area has been reclaimed into a beautiful place. Now we don’t leave our student card for shower, and the shower house is much bigger, but the charge is dependent on time. Besides, a western restaurant has joined our campus with affordable prices. A new library is under construction and my university is still growing, which will benefit its students even more, but it is a pity that I will not see these changes because I am graduating soon.

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Changes That Have Taken Place on My University Campus

I have studied at my university campus for over three years and witnessed its gradual change through these years. When I first came into this school, I thought I was entering high school again – such a small campus! I toured around and it only took me less than an hour to visit its four corners. During the first year, students went to a small house for showers and we had to leave our student card in exchange for a padlock and locker for our possessions. The charge was just 1.5 yuan and we could shower as long as we pleased. The dining halls then always served the same food and our choices were limited. However, now things are much different than before. More buildings have risen**, including the Student Service Center and Student Activity Center. Moreover, an untapped area has been reclaimed into a beautiful place. Now we don’t leave our student card for showers, and the shower house is much bigger, but we are charged according to our time there. Also, a western restaurant has joined our campus with affordable prices. A new library is under construction and my university is still growing, which will benefit its students even more, but it is a pity that I will not see these changes because I am graduating soon.

**or, ..more buildings have been built. Your version is also good, though unusual.

Very well written!

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