The end of year's party of my company
The traditional end of year's party of the company which I work in took place on the last Sunday. The majority of my coworkers attended and they brought over their families. We had a traditional Brazilian barbecue alongside with rice and salad. For dessert, we had ice cream, cake and pudding. For drink, we had a 60 liters barrel of a local craft beer, and soda for those who do not drink alcohol. We had a lot of fun and it was very nice enjoying the company of my coworkers outside of the working environment.
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The end of year's party of my company
The traditional end of year's party of the company which I work in took place on the last Sunday. The majority of my coworkers attended and they brought over their families. We had a traditional Brazilian barbecue alongside with rice and salad. For dessert, we had ice cream, cake and pudding. For drink, we had a 60 liters barrel of a local craft beer, and soda for those who do not drink alcohol. We had a lot of fun and it was very nice enjoying the company of my coworkers outside of the working environment.The only mistakes iI noticed are highlighted in red.
end of year's - You don't need the apostrophe, people would still understand you if you used it, but it isn't necessary.
on the last Sunday - You don't need to say "on the". In English, you only need to say "last Sunday".
alongside with - I would replace this with the words "accompanied by", because it doesn't make much sense. Alternatively you could just remove "alongside" and that would be fine too.
liters - You don't need the 'S' here. It's a little strange, I agree, but it's just not used. You would say "60 liters of beer", or "a 60 liter barrel of beer."
All in all, easily understandable with only minor and infrequent errors. Good job!
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