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I love reading I love reading books and I´m sure that you think it´s a good hobbies but not always. Why not? I´m going to tell you my reason. In my las getaway to Colombia, meanwhile I was waiting my flight at the arrowroot to come back to Spain, I bought a book in a duty free shop about the life of Pablo Escobar who was a colombian drug trafficker. The book whose title is "The drug lord" was written by Alonso Salazar, a colombian writer and journalist. The book relate the life of Pablo Escobar whose I think is very interesting. I started to read this one and immediately I got hooked the story. I read and read some pages but suddenly I remembered that I was waiting my flight. The fly had taken off an hour ago, incredible but true. I had to come back to Bogotá, spending one dat more there and change my flight. If I had known I would have never ever read that book.

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I concur with Daniel's corrections but would say a few things a bit differently myself. (Even native speakers of a language often disagree about how to say things. It's a matter of personal style and regional differences.) So here is my version, but his is correct as well. 


I love reading

I love reading books and I´m sure that you think that's a good hobby, but it isn't always. Why not? I´m going to tell you my reason.
In my last getaway to Colombia, mean while I was waiting for my flight at the arrowroot to come back to Spain, I bought a book in a duty free shop about the life of Pablo Escobar, who was a Colombian drug trafficker.
The book, the title of which is "The drug lord," was written by Alonso Salazar, a Colombian writer and journalist. The book relates the life of Pablo Escobar whose life I think is very interesting. (or "which I think is very interesting")
I started to read this one it and immediately I got hooked on the story. I read and read many pages but suddenly I remembered that I was waiting for my flight. The flight had taken off an hour ago, incredible but true.
I had to come back to Bogotá, spending one day more there, and change my flight. If I had known I would have never ever have read that book.


I'm sorry, I know you must have been unhappy at the time when that happened, but reading about it now made me laugh! It's so much like something I would do.

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I love reading

I love reading books and I´m sure that you think it´s a good hobby but this is not necessarily always the case. Why not? I´m going to tell you my (the) reason.
On my last getaway to Colombia, meanwhile  I was waiting for my flight at the arrowroot to come back to Spain and I bought a book in a duty free shop about the life of Pablo Escobar who was a Colombian drug trafficker.
The book whose title is "The Drug Lord" was written by Alonso Salazar, a Colombian writer and journalist. The book relates to the life of Pablo Escobar, who I think is very interesting.
I started to read this one and immediately I got hooked on the story. I read and read some pages but suddenly I remembered that I was waiting for my flight. The flight had taken off an hour earlier.  Incredible  but true.
I had to return to Bogotá, spending one more day there to change my flight. If I had known, I would never have ever read that book.
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I love reading

I love reading books, and I´m sure (that) you think it´s a good hobby.  But it is not always true . And why do I say that.  Well, I´m going to tell you the/my reason.
On my last trip getaway to Colombia, meanwhile when I was waiting for my flight back to Spain at the airport, arrowroot to come back to Spain, I bought a book in a duty free shop about the life of Pablo Escobar, a famous Colombian drug trafficker, in a duty free shop.
The book, whose title is "The drug lord", was written by Alonso Salazar, a Colombian writer and journalist. The book relates the life of Pablo Escobar, whose life story I think is very interesting.
I started to read it, and immediately, I got hooked on the story. I read and read more some pages/ The more I read , the more I could not put the book down, until  but suddenly I remembered that I was waiting my flight. But alas, the flight had taken off an hour ago. I sounds too incredible to be true, I know, but it is.
I had to return come back to Bogotá, spending one more day there, and book another flight. dat more there and change my flight. If I had known what would happen to me, I would never have read the book.
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haha very sad story but nice

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