About computers
Hello.
My name is Nina.
I would like to talk about using computers.
When I was a elementary student, I have started to use a computer for the first time.
My first using computer was my father's MAC.
I used to watch movies of Omoshiro flash almost everyday.
That's why my parents got angry at me each time.
Maybe because of that, I have become internet addiction.
However I'm striving for the improvement.
For example, at commuting time I'm trying to read as much as I can.
If I use the internet, I I make it a habit to only use research about a study.
But I don't too stand it, I spoiled myself and using it after doing my best something.
Computers, no I take that back, the Internet is very useful, absolutely, but I will continue keeping dose.
Thank you.
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About computers
Hello.My name is Nina.
I would like to talk about using computers.
When I was an elementary student, I have started to use a computer for the first time.
The first computer I used was my father's MAC.
I used to watch Omoshiro flash movies almost everyday.
That made my parents get angry at me every time I used the computer.
Maybe because of that, I have developed an internet addiction.
However I'm trying to improve.
For example, while commenting I'm trying to read as much as I can.
If I use the internet, I I make it a habit to only use it to research for my studies.
But I can't stand it, I harmed my self and am trying to fix it.*
Computers, no I take that back, the Internet is very useful, absolutely, but I will need to be careful with it.
Thank you.
It was generally good and easy to understand. The only paragraph with real difficulties was the paragraph I marked with a * which was difficult to understand. However it was mostly very good
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About computers
Hello.My name is Nina.
I would like to talk about using computers.
When I was an elementary student I started to use computers for the first time.
The first computer I used was my father's MAC.
I used to watch movies of Omoshiro flash almost everyday.
My parents always got angry at me.
Maybe because of that, I have developed an internet addiction.
However, I'm trying to improve.
For example, at commuting time, I'm trying to read as much as possible.
If I use the internet, I only use it to do research for my studies.
But I can't resist it! I spoiled myself and use it as a prize when a I do my best at something.
Computers, no I take that back, the Internet is very useful, absolutely, but I will continue to keep dosing it.
Thank you.
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