Christmas Miracle with my best friend (please correct my mistakes)
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Christmas Miracle with my best friend (please correct my mistakes)
Yesterday, as usual, I woke up early and prepared myself to go to my college. Suddenly, as I was walking down the street, I could hear from far away a girl calling out with a loud voice: "I miss you my friend!" It was my best friend Carla from Poland. "Oh I miss you so much dear! What are you doing here in Norway?" I replied. She told me that she want to give me a big surprise and visit me on Christmas night. Really, that's the best gift I ever had and I will never forget that moment. Thanks.1
Christmas Miracle with my best friend (please correct my mistakes)
Yesterday, as usual, I woke up early and prepared myself to go to my college. Suddenly when I was walking on the street, I saw from far away a distance a girl saying with a loud voice, "I miss you, my friend."Oh wait a minute, my best friend Carla from Poland! "Oh I miss you so much, dear. What are you doing here in Norway?"
She told me that she wanted to make give me a great surprise for me and visit me at the Christmas night.
Really, that's the best gift I ever had, thanks a lot. I didn't won't forget that moment.
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