self introduction
i am LIJU. i am from KERALA(INDIA) which is one of the best place for tourists. i attended cochin university of science and technology where i majored in ece. afterwards ,i i started my carieer in a telecom company as a service engineer. i have been there for 2 years now... in my home my father who is working as a farmer ,my mother who is a house wife and a brother who is working as software engineer.. my hobbies include watching movies and talking... i am an easy going person..
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self introduction
I am LIJU. I am from KERALA(INDIA) which is one of the best place for tourists. I attended cochin university of science and technology where i majored in ece. afterwards ,I started my carieer in a telecom company as a service engineer. I have been there for 2 years now... in my home, my father who is working as a farmer ,my mother who is a housewife and my brother who is working as a software engineer.. my hobbies include watching movies and talking... I am an easy going person..0
I am not going to edit because others have done so. Welcome to the language community and I hope you have fun!
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self introduction
I am LIJU. I am from KERALA(INDIA) which is one of the best places for tourists. I attended Cochin university of science and technology where i majored in ece. Afterwards , I started my carieer career in a telecom company as a service engineer. have been there for 2 years now... in my At home my father, who is working* works as a farmer, my mother who is a housewife and a brother who is working as a software engineer.. My hobbies include watching movies and talking chatting... i am an easy going person.*If it's something temporary, OK, but if he is a farmer in general, you need the Present Simple.
All in all not much to correct, pay attention to the capitalization of the first word in a sentence, the word "I" which is always a capital and names (capitalize only the first letter). Other than that, don't use the "..." too much, it means you want to imply something.
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