Maroon 5
Maroon 5 is one of my favourite american music band.It was mid of 2012, when I heard their song for the first time. I am a die heart fan of this band. Some of my favourite songs of Maroon 5 are Payphone, Suger, One more night, Animals etc. I wish I were able to meet them oneday.
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Maroon 5
Maroon 5 is one of my favourite American music bands.It was mid of 2012, when I heard their song for the first time.* I am a die heart hard fan of this band. Some of my favourite songs (of Maroon 5)** are Payphone, Suger Sugar, One more night, Animals etc. I wish I were able to meet them oneday one day/someday.*Here you have to either specify which song, or say 'one of their songs' instead of 'their song'
**Repetition. Not wrong, but if you want it sound natural, you can ommit the name of the band.
All in all, very good writing! Bravo!
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