go back Guangzhou at the end of this month I have a plan-write an English essay every other day, but it is hard to keep. Sometimes there is too much work to do, sometimes I do not know what to write.

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go back Guangzhou at the end of this month I have a plan-write an English essay every other day, but it is hard to keep. Sometimes there is too much work to do, sometimes I do not know what to write. It happens many interesting things around me every day, and I do want to write them. Unfortunately, due to raise privacy issues, I have to give up. So I can only write something else. =_= Recently it is not so cold in Japan. As for me, Spring and Autumn are the best season, neither too hot nor too cold. How about you? Which is your favorite season? At the end of this month I will go back China, it has been 4 months since I went back Guangzhou last time. The winter in Guangzhou is warm, but Summer is very hot and sometimes there are typhoons. If you are traveling to Guangzhou, I would advise you not to go in summer. Guangzhou cuisine is really delicious, you have got to try. It has been a long day, I am not feeling well. However, I have to finish some important work before 5p.m., so I constantly encouraged myself that I can finish it and finally I did. That is one reason I have time to write this essay at this moment. Tomorrow is the last day in this week as Friday is the Emperor’s Birthday, we do not need to work. So happy~ By the way, do you need to work on this Friday?

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go back I'm going back to Guangzhou at the end of this month. (Use present continuous for something that is set, that is planned)

I have a plan - to write an English essay every other day, but it is hard to keep up with. Sometimes there is too much work to do, sometimes I do not know what to write about. It happens many interesting things around me every day Many interesting things happen around me every day and I do want to write them I want to write about them (use 'do' to emphasize, here it's redundant). Unfortunately, due to raise privacy issues, I have to give up on it. So I can only write about something else. =_=

Recently it is not so hasn't been that cold in Japan. As for me, Spring and Autumn are the best seasons*, neither too hot nor too cold. How about you? Which is your favorite season?
At the end of this month I will go I'm going back to China, it has been 4 months since I last went back to Guangzhou last time. The winter in Guangzhou is warm, but Summer is very hot and sometimes there are typhoons. If you are traveling to Guangzhou, I would advise you not to go in summer. Guangzhou cuisine is really delicious, you have got to try it.

It has been a long day, I am not feeling well. However, I have had to finish some important work before 5p.m., so I constantly encouraged myself that I can to finish it and finally I did. That This is one reason I have time to write this essay at this moment.

Tomorrow is the last day in of this week, and as Friday is the Emperor’s Birthday, we do not need to work. So happy~
By the way, do you need to work on this Friday?

*Not completely wrong, you could say something like 'in my opinion...'. Use 'as for me' if you've talked about someone else previously.

I go back Guangzhou at the end of this month

I have a plan - to write an English essay every other day, but it is hard to keep. Sometimes there is too much work to do, sometimes I do not know what to write. Many interesting things happen around me every day, and I do want to write about them. Unfortunately, due to privacy issues, I cannot*. So I can only write something else. =_=

Recently it has not been so cold in Japan. As for me, Spring and Autumn are the best seasons, neither too hot nor too cold. How about you? Which is your favorite season? (Autumn and Winter).
At the end of this month I will go back China. It has been 4 months since I last went back to Guangzhou. The winter there is warm, but Summer is very hot and sometimes there are typhoons. If you are travelling to Guangzhou, I would advise you not to go in s/Summer. Guangzhou cuisine is really delicious, you have got to try it.

It has been a long day and I am not feeling well. However, I had to finish some important work before 5p.m., so I constantly encouraged myself that I could finish it and finally I did.** That is one reason I have time to write this essay at this moment.

Tomorrow is the last day in this working week as Friday is the Emperor’s Birthday, we do not need to work. So happy~
By the way, do you need to work this Friday? Yes.

*or, I have to give up on this idea.

**Very important: put everything in this sentence in the past tense. Mixing up past and present in the same sentence is very confusing for the reader.

Very well written!

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