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christmas custom around the world ( or christmas traditions)( for correction) I would like to write about Christmas it is a magical season, When people hear the word CHRISTMAS they thing in Santa Claus, Turkey, Christmas Tree ( Pine) , fairy lights, tile, wrapping paper, tinsel, mistletoe , christmas carol( that is different to Christmas song), reindeer, snow and maybe if you are christian you celebrated the birth of Jesus ( Jesuschrist). But in some countries like South America we don't have winter season therefore we don't have snow, or Pines growing in my city, for that reason we have to know the Christmas become in marketing people around the world have the american idea and we change a little bit to our tradition, weather, food and culture. For this purpose I had the great idea to talk about the tradition of christmas around the world and I' m going to start with my country. My writings would be with information on internet if someone don't agree with me let me know ! Simultaneosly I will practice my grammar and my writing so correct me any mistake. I will appreciate all your help. Merry Christmas and happy Holidays .

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christmas custom around the world ( or christmas traditions)( for correction)

I would like to write about Christmas it is a magical season, When people hear the word CHRISTMAS they think about Santa Claus, Turkey, Christmas Tree ( Pine) , fairy lights (if the lights are out for Christmas, they're commonly known as Christmas lights. Fairy lights are year-round), tile(?), wrapping paper, tinsel, mistletoe , christmas carol( that is different to Christmas song), reindeer, snow and maybe if you are christian you celebrated the birth of Jesus ( Jesuschrist). But in some countries like South America we don't have winter season and therefore we don't have snow, or Pines growing in my city, for that reason we have to know the Christmas become traditions(?) in marketing (I don't understand) people around the world have the american idea and we change a little bit to our tradition, weather, food and culture. For this purpose I had the great idea to talk about the tradition of christmas around the world and I' m going to start with my country. My writings would be with information on internet if someone don't agree with me let me know !

Simultaneosly I will practice my grammar and my writing so correct me any mistake. I will appreciate all your help.

Merry Christmas and happy Holidays .


Um, you lost me in that sentence about marketing people the american idea...But other than that, this writing is good practice! Good luck learning and merry Christmas to you too!

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