Apr 25, 2011

I used to have breakfast at McCafé. I don't do it anymore; but sometimes I long for my tea, muffins and pound cakes. Today I returned there and bought an Smoothie, so I arrived toat my English class with a huge plastic glass.


Not bad! 

Use the article "an" before a noun that begins with a vowel. Use "a" when the noun begins with a consonant.

Hey man everything is really good with your writing, only thing is that to make it sound more natural I would say "Today I went back and bought a smoothie" instead of "Today I returned there and bought a smoothie"
also "so I showed up to my English class" instead of "so I arrived to my English class". Like I said, what you wrote is correct it just isn't what you would hear during everyday conversation. Que tengas una buena noche. Adiós.

Apr 25, 2011

I used to have breakfast at McCafé. I don't do it anymore; but sometimes I long for my tea, muffins and pound cakes. Today I returned there and bought an Smoothie, so I arrived to my English class with a huge plastic glass.