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Helping a poor woman
Today I bought* a cup of soup for a homeless woman. Actually, first I thought she is hungry, because there was writing on a paper which read** "I am homeless and broke". Then I thought, giving money directly to her could be useless, because I don't know what she wants to do with that money. I don't want her to spend her money on wine or another kind of alcohol etc. After, on my way back home, I brought a big cup of soup to her because outside it was freezing. Then I felt regret because maybe giving her money was the best way to help her. Maybe she could pay her rent or she has children to feed. I don't know, I was confused and I did my best at that time.And I came home and didn't think about her. I hope she felt a little bit warmer.
*bought = 'buyed'. Brought = 'bringed' (did bring). Many people misspell or confuse these two irregular verbs.
**or, ... because there was written on a paper ''I am homeless..''
Very well written!
Helping a poor woman
Today I bought a cup of soup for a homeless woman. Actually, I thought she was hungry, because she had a piece of paper which said: "I am homeless and broke".I was worried about giving her money because I didn't know what she would do with it. I didn't want her to spend it on alcohol, etc.
On my way back home I gave a big cup of soup to her because the weather was freezing. Then I felt some regret because maybe giving her money was the best way to help her? Maybe she could pay her rent or she has children to feed? I don't know, I was confused but I did my best for her.
I came home and didn't think about her. I hope she felt warmer for a little bit.
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