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Quit smoking Hello everyone Is there someone kind enough to correct me? Why do smokers should quit smoking? Doctors recommend smokers should quit smoking because increase heart disorder and lung disease besides your fatigue goes up. No matter how long you smoke, if’s time give up smoking. The longer you hold a cigarette, the worse for your health so remember this; when you want to smoke think about your health. Don’t take packet of cigarettes out your pocket and if you take it out, throw it away

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Quit smoking

Hello everyone
Is there someone kind enough to correct me?

Why do smokers should quit smoking?

Doctors recommend smokers should quit smoking because of increased risk of heart disorder  and lung disease,  besides in addition to increased your fatigue goes up.

Doctors recommend smokers should quit smoking because of increased risk of heart and lung disease,  in addition to increased fatigue.



No matter how long you smoke, if’s it's time to give up smoking. The longer you hold a cigarette, the worse for your health so remember this; when you want to smoke, think about your health. Don’t take a packet of cigarettes out of your pocket and if you take it out, throw it away.


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