Nurse
As a doctor ,I think Nurse is the greatest job in the world.They gets paid peanuts although they often works extra hours.
When patients are not satisfied with the hospital, they often dare not be angry at doctors, so they are mad at nurses, and even some doctors no respect for nurse, often yelling at nurse.
In addition , nurse is a very hard work. In ICU, when they in night shift ,then often can’t sleep all night. Even if can take a little nap ,they will sleep next to the patients.
Maybe someone’s skill of draw blood is immaturity .Because they have no good equipment to exercise like doctors ,they have to draw blood each other or practice on their own arms.
It is a great job
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Nurse
As a doctor ,I think Nurse is the greatest job in the world.They gets paid peanuts although they often works extra hours.When patients are not satisfied with the hospital, they often dare not to be angry at doctors, so they are get mad at nurses, and even some doctors have no respect for nurses, often yelling at (nurses) them.
In addition , being a nurse is a very hard work / nurses have a very hard work. In the ICU, when they in have/work night shift ,then they often can’t sleep all night. Even if they can take a little nap ,they will sleep next to the patients.
Maybe someone’s skill of drawing blood is immaturity not good enough .Because they have no good equipment to exercise like doctors ,they have to draw blood from each other or practice on their own arms.
It is a great job
I'm not a native English speaker, so I might've got something wrong. Well written!
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Nurse
As a doctor, I think being a nurse is the greatest job in the world.They gets paid peanuts although (I might try using "despite the fact") they often works extra hours.When patients are not satisfied with the hospital, they often dare not don't often dare to be angry at doctors, so they are get mad at nurses. and Even some doctors have no respect for nurses, often yelling at nurse them.
Being a nurse is a very hard work. In the ICU, when they in are on night shift , they often can’t sleep all night. Even if they can take a little nap , they will sleep next to the patients.
Maybe someone’s skill of draw blood is immaturity .Because they have no good equipment to exercise like doctors ,they have to draw blood each other or practice on their own arms. Some nurses are not skilled at drawing blood, but this is because they don't have good equiptment to practice, like doctors do. They have to practice on each other or even on themselves.
It is a great job
Be careful with plural and singular. Make sure you make the verb agree with the subject. Include a space after punctuation.
I agree, my mom is an emergency department nurse and I have so much respect for her! It's not easy! However, you only explain the bad things about being a nurse, not why it's good. Perhaps you could change your topic sentence to nurses have the hardest job in the world!
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