How the eagle fly high
The eagle is watching the storm coming on the crag.
The lighting is flashing, the thunder is roaring.
The eagle just sit still, refuse to fly until feel the rain is fall to him, and knows the hurricane has struck him.
With a loud howl, he rush into the storm, uses the storm to go up to the sky.
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How the eagle fly flies high
The eagle is watching the storm coming on the (crag?).The lighting is flashing, the thunder is roaring.
The eagle just sits still, refuses to fly until it feels the rain is fall to on him, and knows the hurricane has struck him.
With a loud howl, he rushes into the storm, and uses the storm to go up to the sky.
Hi Sean! Great entry, let's look at a few suggestions that may help you:
- Remember when someone is doing something, we use the plural form - (just sit still, refuse / just sits still, refuses)
- Be careful with your use of commas - (...the storm, and uses / ...the storm and uses)
I hope they are useful for you!
David.
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