Christmas Eve
I always love christmas eve, in my country the people are so much stressed all the year, they don´t have time for take a breath and think in the other, or just have a light conversation with the family or friends, but all this things are change in christmas eve, the chilean in this time have a transformation, they're more relaxed, peaceful, and charismatic, the people only thinking in make a gift to the other, or have a beautiful dinner in family, for that reasons christmas eve is my favourite time on the year!.
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Christmas Eve
I always love Christmas. In my country, people are so much stressed during the year, they don´t have time to take a breath and think about the other, or just have a light conversation with their family or friends. But all these things change/ are changed in Christmas eve.In this season, Chilean have a transformation, they're more relaxed, peaceful, and charismatic, their only concern is to make a gift to the other/ make gifts to each other, or have a beautiful family dinner. For these reasons, Christmas eve is my favorite time of the year!I'm not a native English speaker so maybe I've made some mistakes, but I've tried my best:)
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Christmas Eve
I always love Christmas Eve. In my country the people are so stressed all year, they don´t have time for take a breath and think of others, or just to have a light conversation with the family or friends. All this things changes on Christmas Eve. Chileans transform at this time of year. They're more relaxed, peaceful, and charismatic. They only think about the gifts they give to each other, or have a beautiful dinner with family. For these reasons christmas eve is my favourite time on the year!0
Christmas Eve
I always love christmas eve, in my country the people are so much stressed all the year, they don´t have time for take a breath and think in the other, or just have a light conversation with the family or friends, but all this things are change in christmas eve, the chilean in this time have a transformation, they're more relaxed, peaceful, and charismatic, the people only thinking in make a gift to the other, or have a beautiful dinner in family, for that reasons christmas eve is my favourite time on the year!.Christmas Eve
I always love Christmas Eve. In my country the people are so stressed all year that they don't have time to take a breath, think about other things, or just have a light conversation with family or friends. But all this changes on Christmas Eve. On that night Chileans undergo a transformation. They're more relaxed, peaceful, and personable. The people only think about giving gifts to each other or having a beautiful dinner with the family. For those reasons, Christmas Eve is my favorite time of the year.
United States: favorite
Britain: favourite
¡Yo amo Nochebuena también!
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Christmas Eve
I always love Christmas eve! In my country, the people are so much stressed all through the year, they don´t have time for to take a breath and think in the about each other, or just have a light conversation with the family or friends but all these things are change on Christmas eve. The Chileans during in this time have a transformation, they are more relaxed, peaceful, and charismatic. The people only think about exchanging in make a gifts to one another, or have a beautiful dinner in with the family. For these reasons, Christmas eve is my favourite time of the year!Well done, only a few minor errors. Keep practicing =)
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