About Dance
I learned a Chinese classical dance in our folk dance club today, and that made me think of my childhood.I used to dance with confidence and pure happiness. When I left my leg, stretched every finger and kept my back straight, I felt like a queen and nobody could force me to stop.I controlled my breath to coordinate my moves, it felt like the whole world was dancing with me. I was obsessed by dance.
Unfortunately, I failed several subjects that year, and my mom was in rage, so I had to quit dancing.But I still remember how amazing dance was, and today I found the wonderful feeling again!
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About Dance
In folk dance club today, I learned a Chinese classical dance which made me think of my childhood. I used to dance with confidence and pure happiness. When I lifted my leg, stretched every finger, and kept my back straight, I felt like a queen and nobody stop me. I controlled my breath to coordinate my moves. It felt like the whole world was dancing with me. I was obsessed with dance.Unfortunately, I failed several subjects that year and my mom was furious, so I had to quit dancing. But I still remember how amazing dancing was, and today I found that wonderful feeling again!
Just as a tip, I moved "In folk dance club today" to the beginning of the sentence so that "Chinese classical dance" was next to the adjective phrase which describes it "which made me think of my childhood." The other way is correct, however to create clear and professional writing, it's always best to have descriptors next to their noun.
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