Is the current public transport sistem adequate for the real necessities in the city
We live in a modern world, but not everyone has their own mean of transport.
Not everyone can drive, for example, children can't drive a car and they use public transport, or eldery people, who can't drive car too, use the public transport. Also we can have situation when our car is broken and we can be late to work if we will go on foot. So, public transport help us in this difficult situations.
But public transport has minuses too. We have to wait buses or trams for long time and they are often overcrowded, and we are in the tightness. So, underground more comfortable than it.
Public transport is needed in the cities but it should be more comfortable for us.
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Are you writing this for an exam? Your ideas are well-organised and your examples are clear.
Vocabulary: On an exam, you need to show a wide range of vocabulary, so try not to repeat words. Use a different form (transport-->transportation), opposites (private transport) or as you have done, examples (bus, tram). I've made a couple of changes to show this.
Grammar: If you have a grammar book, look up "IF" sentences and look at the examples. To talk about a possible situation, we often use a mix of modals and past tense verbs.
"Also we MIGHT have situation when our car is broken and we WOULD be late to work if we WENT on foot. So, public transport COULD help us in this difficult situations."
Is the current public transport sistem adequate for the real necessities in the city
We live in a modern world, but not everyone has their own meanS OF TRAVEL of transport.Not everyone can drive, for example, children can't drive a car and they use public transport, or eldery people, who can't drive car too, use the public transport.ATION Also we can have situation when our car is broken and we can be late to work if we will go on foot. So, public transport help us in this difficult situations.
But public transport IT has minuses too. We have to wait buses or trams for long time and they are often overcrowded, and we are in the tightness. So, underground more comfortable than it.
Public transport is needed in the cities but it should be more comfortable for us.
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Is the current public transport system adequate for the real necessities in the city
Public transport has advantages. We live in a modern world, but not everyone has their own mean of transport.Not everyone can drive. For example, children can't drive so they use public transport. Eldery people, who can't drive, also use public transport. Also if we have car trouble we can be late for work if we go on foot. So, public transport help us in these difficult situations.
But public transport has disadvantages too. We have to wait for buses or trams for a long time and they are often overcrowded. So, the underground more comfortable then those options.
Public transport is needed in the cities but it should be more comfortable for us.
Hello!
note: I have made some corrections when you used this/these (singular/plural). Also we would say we are late "for work" in this situation. A native speak also wouldn't say that their car is broken. We say we have car trouble or our car broke down (if you are busy driving and something happens in that moment)
good job!
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