The day I stay in China
When I arrived China , it's very cold and I don't like very cold weather . In New Zealand , it's not very hot in summer and very cold in winter. And there are many people in China . there are many cars on the road. But I very miss Chinese food . And when I stay in New Zealand , I very want to eat snack of Tianjin.
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The day I stay in China
When I arrived in China , it was very cold. I don't like very cold weather. In New Zealand , it's not very hot in summer and not very cold in winter. (I think that's what you mean?) And there are many people in China. There are many cars on the road. But I really miss Chinese food . And when I stay in New Zealand, I really want to eat snacks from Tianjin.Good work! Mostly just a few small things here and there. Just one thing I'd like to point out: we use "very" to modify adverbs and adjectives, but you can't use it modify verbs. When you're modifying a verb, you should use a different adverb, like "really", instead. For example:
"I am very hungry."
"I really want to eat."
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The day I stay in China
When I arrived in China , it's was very cold and I don't like very cold weather . In New Zealand , it's not very hot the in summer and very cold in winter. And there are many people in China . tThere are many cars on the road. But I very miss Chinese food a lot. And when I stay in New Zealand , I veryreally want to eat the snack of Tianjin.Want to progress faster?
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