Thinking in front of my silly table.
I was sat in front of my silly table, thinking about what to do with my life when a shiny thought did appear in my mind. !I would like to build a nanobot cloak! But I am so lazzy to built this kind of things, so other thought did appear in my mind ! I would like to build a motors broomstick! I would love to fly with it.! But it is so difficult to build, and I am so lazy. So other thought did appear in my mind. “ I want to become in a magician and I would like to do away the laptops of ordinary people, But it could be so dangerous. So I wore with my grumpy shoes to walk around the park, and to reckon about what to do with my life.
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Thinking in front of my silly table.
I was sat in front of at my silly table, thinking about what to do ("what I could do" sounds better) with my life when a shiny thought did appeared in my mind.! ("popped into my head" sounds better.) "I would like to build a nanobot cloak!" But as I am so too lazzy to built this kind of things, so another thought did appear appeared in my mind "I would like to build a motorised broomstick!" How I would love to fly with it! But it is would be too difficult to build, and I am so very lazy. So, yet another thought did appeared in my mind. "I want to become in a magician and I would like to do away the laptops of ordinary people." But it that could be so very dangerous. So, I put on my (old?) wore with my grumpy shoes and walked to walk around the park, and to reckon thinking about what to do with my life.Nice little story, just a few corrections. The phrase "popped into my head" is common in English. Also "grumpy" is used to describe a person's mood, it's not used for describing inanimate objects.
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Thinking in front of my silly table.
I was sat in front of my silly table, thinking about what to do with my life when a shiny thought appeared in my mind! I would like to build a nanobot cloak! But I am too lazy to build this kind of thing, so another thought appeared in my mind! I would like to build a motorised broomstick! I would love to fly with it! But it is so difficult to build, and I am so lazy. So another thought appeared in my mind. “ I want to become a magician and I would like to do away with the laptops of ordinary people, but it could be so dangerous. So I wore my grumpy shoes to walk around the park in, and to reckon about what to do with my life.Want to progress faster?
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